Showing posts with label me. Show all posts
Showing posts with label me. Show all posts

Monday, February 13, 2012

THE WINNING STORY

So I won the second prize in Dianah's place "write 'n win" competition and i just want to bring the story here so that you guys can read too (I am nice like that.lol)
Many thanks to Dianah for the cash prize, i got it already and NO, i am not sharing....except maybe with one person. Lets get to the story already, shall we?

He stopped and wiped his face with the back of his hand. After gaining his breath back, he bent down and started pushing the truck again. This is how he lives, how he survives, how he feeds his wife and two kids, how he sends his children to school. This truck-pushing business is his job.Ike stepped under the shade to hide from the scorching sun; he knew Mama Bisi would not scold him like other women who do not allow truck-pushers to stand under their shade.
"How market?" Mama Bisi asked.
"Fine o, we thank God" he replied.
He bought "pure water" from mama Bisi and promised to pay when he collects the money for his delivery. This was his first round; he had come late because his youngest son was very sick. He shook his head and dismissed the thought from his head. He had to concentrate; he would think about Chike later. He tore the pure water and finished it in one gulp as he continued pushing the truck towards the warehouse.
Ike delivered the goods to the warehouse, collected his money and was heading out when he heard shouts from the next shop.
"Fire.....fire!!"
Ike ran to the shop. He thought about his sick son, he should take his earnings home immediately but he couldn’t leave the people in the fire.
He ran inside.
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He felt the cool breeze before he saw the fan swirling above him. The bed he lied on felt unfamiliar and all his body ached. Where was he? He tried to move his body but the pain was too much.
“You are in the hospital sir……….please don’t try to move…….”
Ike looked at the kind nurse as he began to recollect the previous day happenings. He had ran into the burning building and immediately sighted a pregnant woman, she had been too weak to stand up and it seemed like she had gone into labour. He couldn’t see well through the thick smoke. He groveled till he got to the woman and carried-dragged her outside, almost choking from the smoke.
Ike sighed and reached to touch his pocket but all he felt was sore skin.
“My money, where’s my money?”
“I am sorry sir but we didn’t find any money…………..we were trying to save you.
He broke down. Why had he done it? Why had he risked his son’s life to save a stranger? His friends had always said his kindness would be his undoing………..he had laughed them off and told them doing good everyday is his way of life. Maybe they were right. How would he explain to his wife that his good deeds cost him the money for their son’s treatment?
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Amaka, Ike’s wife was smiling when she entered her husband’s ward.
“Amaka, I am so sorry, they said they can not find the money I wanted to bring home for Chika’s treatment…………..I  had it, it was in my pocket…………I’m sorry”
Amaka smiled as she held her husband’s hand
“Its o.k. my husband. The woman you saved delivered a set of twins and you don’t have to worry about Chika’s hospital bills, it has already been paid for by the woman’s family”.


Please checkout the first prize winner on Dianah's blog.........................that story is AWESOME.
*ermmmm, sorry but the picture is totally unrelated

Wednesday, November 30, 2011

THE RIGHT ONE

I looked deep into his dark sparkling eyes, it always seems like they hold a mystery and everytime I try unraveling it I just end up smiling and shaking my head. I am in love with this man. He read my mind and smiled at me...
“I love you too babe.”
His smile does wonderful things to me and his mere stare sends my heart racing like a pumping machine (whack comparison I know but you get my drift right?)
We were relaxing at the lounge of a five star hotel in Dubai. He had told me earlier that week that he had a surprise for me; I knew it was going to be something great because he hardly disappoints. He knew I had wanted a trip to Dubai again but I hadn’t expected it so soon.
When he came to pick me, he had a mischievous smile on his face and when I asked him where we were going  he told me he didn’t want to spoil the surprise.
So here I am, having my best birthday, in Dubai, with the man I love. Life doesn’t get better than this. We had explored all the fun places, got back to our room and after cleaning up decided to grab a quick dinner before going back to our room.
The waiter came and took our orders. I was busy teasing him about how many admirers he got just today when the waiter brought our food. I opened my plate and saw a box. I was planning all the “grammar” I was going to speak to the waitress before it dawned on me that it might be a ring inside. I looked at the waitress.......she was smiling sheepishly. I looked at him......he was on his knees.
“Marry me Lucy. Life would be incomplete without you.”
I know some of you are already planning how to make it to my wedding. I’m sure MY SISTER is about ordering her gown now, and some are even about to write long congratulatory messages, not forgetting the “aso ebi” people. 
Please continue.
I will, I will, I will marry you; I’ll be the mother of your children........ *waterworks*
And then somebody started ringing a bell.........it didn’t stop.....it kept ringing.
“Somebody tell that person to stop that rubbish!! Don’t you know it’s my fab. moment?”
It still kept ringing
“Stoooooooooopppppp!!”
And I woke up.
The ringing was from my stupid alarm.