It
was a sunny day when we left for Ekiti. I had told Ola I was going with Mum for
a wedding in our hometown. He had murmured something about taking Yvonne to my
sister's place before I left. Lara, my only sister lived on the other side of
Lagos. I hate dropping my daughter with her because she picks up bad manners
every weekend she spends with her. I am three years older than Lara and we have
nothing in common. Dad used to call her the prodigal daughter. She dropped out
of school after three years and even when Dad set up a business for her, she said
it was too much work. Lara however was Mum’s favorite……..the one she pampers
and doted on. I had no choice but to drop Yvonne with Lara, it was a better
option than being involved in one of the many Lagos housegirl/nanny horror
tales
“Yeeee........”
I screamed.
Mum
looked back from her bike and shouted at me...
“What
is it Temi?”
“Mum,
these potholes are breaking my waist and this bike man is not driving carefully
at all.”
Mum
did her legendary "hmmnnnnmm” and told me “sorry”.
We
were on our way to “Baba's” place. I had left my car at the junction after
paying a boy Five hundred Naira to watch it, I thought it was outrageous but
Mum said it was cheap. Mum said we had to take a bike from there because the
road was not motorable. I hate bikes……….a lot so Mum thought my complains were
because of my pronounced hatred for bikes and not because I was feeling
uncomfortable.
Mum
always thought I was the spoilt one. She blamed Dad for pampering me so
much.....she blamed me every time something went wrong, always saying I messed
it up with my "spoilt" life. Mum had strongly kicked against it when Dad
was about sending me abroad to study, saying it would make me more "big
headed" but Dad had sent me anyway and when I came back Mum had sworn I
wouldn’t get a husband………………not with my uncultured way of life. When I brought
Ola home, she was surprised and immediately told Ola how I’ll soon be bossing
him around but he had stayed anyway and we had lived happily.......until now.
"Are
we not there yet?” I shouted again.
Mum
didn’t even answer me this time. She just pointed at the big tree in the
distance.
"Mum!!
Are we going to meet a tree?”
"Shut
up Temi. You don’t talk much around here"
"But
Mum, you said we were coming to meet “Baba”"
I’m
sure Mum would have slapped me then if she had been close enough. She gave me
her "shut the hell up" look and faced away.
The
bike men stopped and I was partially grateful because my legs were killing me
already. I jumped down from the bike before protesting that we were not at the
tree yet. Mum paid the bike men while explaining that we had to trek the rest
of the "sacred land".
I
was too tired and angry to argue, I just hoped the visit would be worth it and
followed Mum as she made her way down the narrow path. I had to swat flies away
with my bag a thousand times. The smell was horrible.........it was like lots
of animals or humans died and decayed thereby giving the flies a merry
gathering.
“Mum,
Mum......why did you bring me to this kind of place?”
“Is
it not for your own good?” Mum asked with unmasked disdain.
I
swallowed hard and put my hands on my ears; even that did little to reduce the
noise of the flies.
We
finally got to the foot of the tree and Mum started a dramatic dance. Before I
could decide if she was alright or not she started singing....
"o
ye gods of the earth, o ye princes of the trees, I hail thee....."
I
stood watching her, my jaw open and my eyes popping out
****Tomorrow is my birthday!! Please don't forget to forward all gifts, cakes and cards. Thank you. Shoutout to Chinny, Honeydame, Che, Sisi Yemmie, 9ja great, PET project and all October babies. We ROCK!
34 comments:
Hahahahahahaha, this is totally a different twist...the mum na the baba gan gan
Now we have to wait again. Nice one!
Happy birthday in advance dear
That story got me.
Happy birthday,the Lord bless you mightily. <3
First time on your blog,nice
Happy birthday!
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Happy birthday sweetie!
Please hurry with the continuation asap :)
her mum na winch o, which kind mum be this na? chei! now suspense wan kill me sef, when is the continuation abeg?
Happy birthday girl... who the Lord has blessed is blessed, you are blessed indeed. best wishes!
As usual,i was captivated.I actually like this very story.Hope you'll continue o?!
Happy birthday once more! *hugz*
Happy Birthday, Lue... Have a swell one...
Happy birthday lue!
Picturing the mother actually doing the dramatic dance...yeah that got me rolling.
Happy Birthday, wish you more of everything-peace, love & happiness always!
I can't believe I missed your birthday. So so sorry dear, And you share the same birthday with my mum.
Happy belated wishes sweetheart xo
Happy belated birthday!!! So Mama is Baba?!?! Lol
Good to be visiting your weblog once far more, it continues to be months for me. Nicely this post that i've been waited for so lengthy. I want this article to total my assignment in the university, and it has very same topic together along with your post. Thanks, terrific share.
wow, this one is good, gonna use for another sport but i think it'll be just as good, BIG thanks :)
dayor, lol. thanks a lot dear.
gretel, amen. thank you
Trendysturvs, thanks for dropping by
Toin, thank you. Yes ma'am
Priscy, haha, very soon. Thank you so much dear, God bless you.
9jagreat, i will definitely continue. thanks
Da injurer, thank you
Tamie, thanks
blogoratti, thanks a lot and thanks for dropping by
@MsJB, no probs dear. Really? thats soooo cool
Mstizzle, lol...i no know o. thank you
Anons, thank you
Happy belated birthday dear and yes,we October babies rock*lol*. mine's on d 28th tho.. Hmmm this story is becoming more interesting oo,hope u'll continue it..
Happy belated Birthday dear.
I am waiting for the next post ;)
Awww...I missed ur birthdae bt aanywayz..happy birthday to uuuuu lucy!!!!wishing u d best in life..
And as fr ur twist...ummm....
I greatly appreciate all the info I've read here. I will spread the word about your blog to other people. Cheers.
No pressure but part 3 da?
I really appreciate this post. I have been looking all over for this! Thank goodness I found it on Bing. You’ve made my day! Thx again
Loool. Nice and funny story! Reminded me of a scene in the Sandra Bullock movie "The Proposal". The grandma dancing and chanting to the gods of the earth and mother nature.
Happy Birthday in arrears! i hope you had a great day filled with love and laughter! Cheers to many more!
its been a while since i've been on here! I sure do miss reading here! hopefully i'll be chanced to read more!
*cough cough*
This is fiction right? Or did this actually happen to you? Either way you write well Luciano...caught my attention all the way through...and I like the way you gave life to the characters and made them believable...that is if this is really fiction oh!
Is this fiction or real-life story. Hope you could put it in a movie. I can't wait to read the conclusion.
Blessings......and happy birthday.
Sound like Mum is a little envious of her daughters ability to adapt, learn and excel and though she is proud of her she cant get the envy out from her eyes and throat long enough to say it.
stay blessed.
rhapsody
Hope you had a fab bday. Hmmm...a story with many layers.
Happy Belated Birthday love!
Nice story....bt still waiting 4 the concluding part of d story.
I began the story at Part 3 but I've finally read 1 and 2. Awesome read and nice suspense... My specialty. I also dish it out well on the series I'm doing a series on my blog.
Happy belated birthday!
"...it was like lots of animals or humans died and decayed thereby giving the flies a merry gathering."
Those are my favourite lines, I am running off to the third part now. The suspense is high, fellow blogger.
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I know this is coming very late, but HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY sweets. I'm sure you had a wonderful celebration. Yep, we October kids rock.
You are such a gifted writer. I read the part 3 first and quickly scrolled down to read the first two parts.
Keep writing and we would keep coming back to read.
*hugs*
Nice one luciano!
This is quite interesting and captivating
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